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  • HeavyMetalPonies

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    why cant she just marry james? these stories make me so angry but i cant stop reading them
    August 20th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • TanyaVV

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    im so sad now!!! even if i loved previous story, i would push emma into face to wake up andnot doing this shit :/
    May 16th, 2013 at 10:11am
  • CourageKeeper

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    this series is really really good.
    the ending was a a bit upsetting but not in a bad way. more like "its a bittersweet ending" sort of thing.
    I'm sad to see this end considering how well written it is but.. I loved it all the same <3
    March 21st, 2013 at 10:09am
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    Aww, thanks so much, I'm super glad you enjoyed this and Not the American Average! Thank you for the comment! :-)
    March 3rd, 2013 at 12:49pm
  • FallAmyFly

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    The ending to this killed me. Seriously Not the American Average and this story were two of the most well written stories I've read. And the ending honestly made me want to cry. :'( but it was amazing none the less
    March 3rd, 2013 at 09:20am
  • SoSoAlizadeh

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    OMFG please tell she married him in the end because thats all i ever wanted this story to end in since i started Not the American Average
    January 23rd, 2013 at 04:42am
  • lyrainthedark

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    I hope you randomly decide to continue this story because i want to see if Emma finds her prince (or realizes he was there all along). Please do a little one shot (of a whole story I'm not picky) to say what she's done with her life and if that's moving to Kansas and having nine kids with a ginger named Julio. Then okay i want to hear about Emma's ginger babies! I'm cool with that.So, please don't leave it on a cliff hanger.
    January 15th, 2013 at 11:19am
  • m0dw0lves

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    WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY sorry not sorry but she should've married ben because no i have to forever live in this state of permanent heart break
    January 9th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • ThisBitchLovesJames

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    Omfg! I was not expecting that! such a good ending though! sad though :(( I really enjoyed this fanfic, thank you for creating it!! x
    January 7th, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • MIWfan666

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    NO NO NO NO NO!! omg im like crying!!! I mean dont get me wrong i wanted her to be with james instead of ban but omg!!!! :( i loved the story tho ( as u can tell) and no its done and im all depressed and shit lol
    January 5th, 2013 at 10:08pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Oh goodness. This was amazing. I just can't even. Though I do wish it wasn't the end for this because it would be cool to see everyone's points of view when she says "I don't."
    January 2nd, 2013 at 05:22pm
  • psycho_cinderella

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    Ohhh my god!!! Talk About an ending!!! Damn girl you've done this story proud! I'm so sad to see it go but I do believe its the right time and it woe be foolish to drag it out and kill the essence of the story. Thank you for entertaining us for so long it really was worth the wait to see the ending, I also like the fact you didn't go with a cliche ending its so unique. I shall look forward to reading some of your new stuff!
    December 30th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • lover of Ben Bruce

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    So sad it ended but I love how that the last thing she said is "I don't". Btw I lot e your new Tony Perry story.
    December 29th, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • thesungoesdown

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    This is so incredibly well written!
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:46pm
  • faussaire

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    Oh no, please give us a happy ending? Please, please, please?
    December 29th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • littleedeath

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    I really hope they get married! they're cute even though Ben can be an idiot....
    you should totally write an Austin Carlile story!!
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I loved this chapter!! Update soon again please.

    And I'd say you should write about Matty Mullins (Memphis May Fire)... Or, Jamie Preciado... Or if none of these two, then Tony Perry :)
    December 29th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • American_suiteheartx

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    I loved reading this story. I hope it works out for Emma and Ben in the end. I can't wait for the final chapter!!
    As for the new story, I can't wait to read that, maybe it should be a Tony Perry or Jaime Preciado. I'd read a story with anyone from Pierce The Veil actually.
    December 29th, 2012 at 12:23am
  • lover of Ben Bruce

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    I say they still get married and Ben realizes he can't be an jerk towards Emma if he wants to stay with her. Can't wait for the last chapter!! & maybe you should write a story about Tony Perry!!
    December 29th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • fightmytongue

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    Cant wait for the last chapter x
    December 28th, 2012 at 10:36pm