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  • The.Archivist

    The.Archivist (100)

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    Wow. What a twist. Well written and great descriptions. The font size is a little small though.
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • The.Secret.Keeper

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    Interesting first chapter. I like how in-depth the character seems. And the end of the chapter was not what I expected. Nice turning point.
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:45am
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