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Teenage Memories (100)

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@ fiction246
Ugh you have no idea.

August 31st, 2013 at 05:10am

fiction246 (100)

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Damn Casey is probably going to be annoyed tomorrow!! Hope he doesn't try anything else with Alex!!

August 31st, 2013 at 05:06am

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@ fiction246
I am so glad you like it! And ahw Casey is well he's a special kind of person. Rodney is something as well. I will definitely have more soon. :)

August 1st, 2013 at 04:46am

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@ fiction246
I am so glad you like it! And ahw Casey is well he's a special kind of person. Rodney is something as well. I will definitely have more soon. :)

August 1st, 2013 at 04:46am

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Just found this and I really like it!!! I really liked Casey at the start but I don't anymore!! Hopefully Rodney is a bit better for Alex!! Looking forward to more :)

July 31st, 2013 at 12:48pm

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@ eragorn122
Ah, thought so but I was just checking. Hopefully the confusion will be cleared up next update.

July 30th, 2013 at 02:37am

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@ IxCantxStandxIt
Both? Feels are high, confusion is higher.

July 30th, 2013 at 02:04am

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@ eragorn122
Is this an expression of feels or are you asking me what is going on? :p

July 29th, 2013 at 10:49pm

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@ resplendently
Oh no! I did not mean to give you such feels!

July 29th, 2013 at 10:45pm

eragorn122 (100)

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Mr. Cruz and what the actual fuck?

July 28th, 2013 at 06:36am

resplendently (100)

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I AM CONFUSED AND AFRAID AND UPSET BECAUSE OF MR. CRUZ.

July 28th, 2013 at 06:22am

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@ Laserquest
I am so glad that you liked it and read as far as you did! I surely hope that you decide to commit to this because even though I haven't updated in a while I still am working on it and I think its going to be great.

I am glad that you think Alex isn't a Mary Sue. I am also glad that you think that I was able to make my characters relatable.

I supplied pictures for those who wanted to actually see the characters, but I thought that it would be very unrealistic if I went on about what the characters looked like when Alex couldn't see them for himself. And if you were ever bored and had some free time I would be delighted if you pointed those out so that I could fix them. (I have trouble noticing my own mistakes.)

June 30th, 2013 at 11:11pm

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Hey babe, this is my comment swap.

The story is amazing. I honestly stopped at five because I'm multitasking, but I'm sure to read the rest.

Anyhow. I enjoy reading stories where the main character has some kind of psychical or mental handicap, as other authors are too busy trying to complete their character into a Mary-Sue complexion. Alex and the co-characters are very relatable, and as a high school student I'm sure I speak for most.

I also adore how instead of incorporating detail on vision and appearance you use the other senses that Alex is use to, getting the reader into his mind and to think like him. This story is genius, and though I found some small grammatical errors [Which, as a Grammar Nazi, stuck out.], the story is absolutely perfect. I can't wait to see more.