Come out of the Shade - Comments

  • Join the Masquerade

    Join the Masquerade (100)

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    Anything written in this story never happened or is going to happen.
    OH GOOD. Poor Tom! His neck is far too lovely for that D: haha
    Though he'd be a damn fiiiine vampire.

    I'm interested to find out where Chris comes into this. :D
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:56pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    HIDDLESWORTH!! Here, on mibba! Arms Thank you!
    I.Adore.This.To.Death.
    I loved the way you played this out, the flow and content. Vampire!Tom is epic. I can't wait for him to meet Chris, it's going to be so awesome tehe
    You should definitely keep this!
    LOVED IT! And can't wait for more :D
    August 12th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • ChazlySilver

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    Can I make love to this story and therefore also marry it? I love it deeply, and i love the fact its Tom :3 mwhehehe, Please update soon because I love Vampires, London, and Tom and Chris. XD
    August 11th, 2012 at 03:41pm
  • Mischief Izzy

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    Okay first off layout, simple, effective and easy on the eye and the banner is lovely.
    The first three paragraphs are very good intricate details, vampires in London is a nice touch, I've never read a fic that featured Vampires in England.
    Second section starts off nicely and I love the interaction between Tom and Benjamin, a conflicting friendship.
    Ending was very good too and now I am to assume that Tom will be our Vampire for the story.

    Loved it, I'm definitely going to subscribe to this.
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:32pm