Sunday in New York - Comments

So cute. Love it.

im not falling for it... Christian is just trying to butter her up and then make his move... I just hope she doesnt fall for it Hudson is good guy!

aww he really is liking her!

I can sense some tension coming, and again LOVE THE NAME

Aw, Christian is falling for her! Love this story so much. I get excited when I see that u updated this story in my inbox.

See he's not a creep he didn't go anything! So happy for this new update and even when she's drunk she loves Hudson, sheesh.

Love this honey.

And again the title is amazing!

No I liked it, I wanted avery and christian to have a legit kind of friendship before/if anything happened. (I really don't want him to be a bad guy)

Not only can she see the affect that he has on women but she can see and feel the affect that he has on her. I want to believe though that he isn't a womanizer and that's just how people perceive him. I'm not sure if that would make the story more/less complex if Avery starts to catch feelings.

Love this!!!!!!!!!!

Oo this is getting gooood!!!! Clearly she can see theeffect he has on women, just a matter of time before she feels it too

Happy this fight didn't last long and Christian is being the dutiful friend/colleague at the moment but I just really want some drama. [Again Christian sounds kinda yummy ;p]

Hudson really wasn't freaking out as much as she is making it seem. He understands that this is a great opportunity to be traveling and he has concerns not even about her but about him because he is an older man. He wasn't insinuating that she can't take care of herself but rather she might be a little trusting at first.

She doesn't seem like the type to cheat (yet), but idk Christian sounds kind of delicious lol!

Can't wait for more, this is getting even more interesting!

mesmerizing**

mesmerizing**

i sense some drama drama drama...
also: I love the fact that you upload a new photo pertaining to each chapter :)
it's cute that they are almost playing house. And I thought it was SO funny that his name is Christian, I instantly thought of Fifty when his name was introduced.

And yes blue eyes are mesmirizing

Amazing. :D.

Ugh I love the Great Gatsby ! A fantastic piece of writing (as is this story) andim looking forward to the movie so much. I am privy to those upper manhattan parties, can feel like a fairy tale to those who aren't used to it.

Two updates in one day made my whole day!
I'm sure they want a long future together and they'll figure it out even if there might be a potential risk. Love this story

I just love them I smell a trip coming in the future