It's Just Me - Comments

Oh wow. Tht's really all I have to say. You have amazing detail and I couldn't stop reading. It took me a little time to read it tho. But I wish this was a story now instead of a one-shot. You did an amazing job on this story. I wish there was more. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone.

Oh wow. Tht's really all I have to say. You have amazing detail and I couldn't stop reading. It took me a little time to read it tho. But I wish this was a story now instead of a one-shot. You did an amazing job on this story. I wish there was more. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone.

Damn....this is AMAZING! haha I love the detail, especially the murder scene. Just...the detail fucking amazing. The story fits amazingly well with the song. I just wanna take the story and hug the life out of it. You should write another like this, or a sequel...though a sequel might ruin the story...hmm but you should totally write another with this kind of theme

This was great!! Very well written!! I've never heard the song It's Just Me before so I youtubed it then read this. As I read this I had the song playing in my head the whole time!! Perfect!!

I`m not the biggest Craig Mabbitt fan, but I absolutely loved this story. It put me in a horror movie mood. I really hope you make a sequel to this because it was amazing to read.

This was like a creepy psycho but good story I enjoyed it :)

This was very well written! I feel like I was actually there watching from the sidelines.
I loved it! :D

Wow. This, was so good. It was intense, and believable. It also fits perfectly with the song. You are an amazing writer. You truly made him sound insane, I love this so much.

You've got the sound of a madman in this piece. I could easily see this character in one of those Criminal Minds episodes. Very chilling.

One thing that I would add if writing this piece myself would be more insignificant details. Insane people usually focus on very small, insignificant details, and they'll make their lives revolve around those details. For instance, the color red or water dripping. Something small that will continually bring him to the memory of killing his girlfriend. You've already got that idea of red in there pretty well with her lipstick and her blood. You could delve into this a little more by talking about other trivial things that could remind him of this red color - a stop sign, another girl's lipstick, even a red bracelet. These sort of things are especially chilling because after us readers read the story, we'll see a stop sign or some lipstick and be reminded of what Craig did. It's a very powerful feeling.

I like the little sign you continually put in your story of I'm Losing Control, but I don't think it really fit with this story. As far as Craig is concerned, he's not losing control. He's perfectly sane. So while I like the idea of a sign showing up continuously like that, I don't think losing control is a good symbol to this story.

AMAZING!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! honestly can't put in words how much I really enjoyed and loved it!!!!

~T. Strange~

OK. There is literally no words to describe how awesomely chilling this is. Seriously, I AM TERRIFIED! I LOVE THIS! I mean everything - especially the beginning - is riveting! I love these twisted morals Craig has set himself with. I love it! :)

This is really amazing. The details. The way it's wrote. I loved it :)