We Just Wanted to Talk - Comments

I like the story, but the German is incorrect. You often use the formal you instead of the informal you. There are a couple German sentences that aren't translated correctly. I don' want to sound mean, or anything. I really like this story. It's very well written. :-)
P.S. if anyone gives me any shit for pointing the German sentences out, I was born and partially raised in Germany and I speak it fluently. Also bitte nicht motzen, ja? Danke. :-)

Love it, win the star search Bill can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh my Odin i'm so glad your back
and soon there band will be big and epic and everyone will love them

Omg I just can't wait for them to get famouse becuz everyone would want to be their friends but thts not goin to happen, man I really wished tht Chandler beat tht girl's ass for makin fun of her man and Bill, fucking bitch but she slapped the hell out of the boy, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Who the fuck do they think they are making fun of Bill and Tom I should kill them

<3

Love it, only Tom would provoke the old man by shooting the gun again smh, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Good old halloween

Ahhhhhhh he asked her to be his girlfriend eeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! I'm sooo happy for u Tom u finally asked her omg I love it ahhhh and response she kissed him and Tom tht means yes, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

What took them so long

They should just tell geach other that they like each other

@ MoMo_92
The picture is not part of the shirt, just an F.Y.I
Glad you like it though!

Awww he kissed her on the cheek how cute, Tom please don't play wih Chandler's heart, anyhoo the shirt looks awesome and Chandler and Tom r gettin closer than normal, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Tom we knw your a big bad player but you better not play with Chandlers heart

Tom is actually goin to try and start something with Chandler, I think it's sweet of her to tutor Tom in english, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, I'm sure they r goin to change their band name soon and when they do, fan girls will come amongst them in the near future and I shall fan girl in the comments, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

One step closer to tokio hotel

Bill and Tom r soo funny together, Tom is slowly gettin better at learning and speaking English, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Tom and his hair

I love it, Chandler has a crush on Tom as well, I'm excited becuz Georg and Gustav is now introduced, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)