babe i lovee this soo muchh:')
October 3rd, 2012 at 06:35pm
I'm here from comment swap.
I'm going to be honest, I do love harry potter, but not in fanfiction, so please don't take it personally. also, the layout is a little harsh on the eyes, so maybe you can change it, if you don't want to then that's perfectly okay. I do like your grammar, very clean. Your description is also nice and it flows well.
I really hope my comment didn't discourage you. Please continue writing.
:)
