This story pulled me out of a dark place. I've been depressed since my ex told me that he no longer loves me. And I never had anything to distract me from it. And I found you story and fell in love with it. It's a bit cheesy but I still love it. Your writing is excellent and I applaud you for putting the emotion into it. I'm happy I found this story, because I've been a happier person. I can't explai exactly why, but it really helped me smile again. Like a miracle. Thank you for writing this story. It's appreciated.
Ugh! What happened to that sick pedophile anyways? Did he die?? Or was he just caught? He should have committed suicide.. o.o Poor Logan! He's losing hope! Hopefully his mother helped him with that... you can't let Maggie die though! That would be too cruel! Logan didn't even had the chance to make her even happier than she was! And what about Brady? He didn't have the chance to let his sister embrace him willingly yet! And the mom?? She didn't apologize because of her psycho ex yet.
FUCKING SHIT! That guy is SICK! Like, psycho sick! O_O where is Logan? This would be the moment for him to burst through the door, beating the shit out of Paul! Poor Maggie! :(
wow!what was that i did not expect that what so ever!!what exactly does Paul want with Maggie?... Logan is good at reading ppl he knew he was bad...oh i hope he doesn't kill Rachel!
Holy fucking shit! What jut happened?! First everything was fine and then bam this?! :0 and the mother going for a man in his twenties?! Shiit! She's so blind! And Logan better appears quick!! >.<
I seriously love everyone who has commented! Keep commenting me, and motivating me to finish the story. I would have never gotten this far without you guys!
I love the story I feel like maybe he's sick as well, idk perhaps his family life isn't the best, he does compare it to Maggie's a lot in the earlier chapters.