Defect. - Comments

What up with alpha henny?

I loved it :)
Update soon
Amazing chapter
Can't wait to find out what happens
What is Venus going to do or say to Henry now that she knows

Brilliant update. Can't wait to see what happens next

Can't quit now! you must update! :D

I'm usually a silent reader but I'm letting you know that you need to update :)

Interesting story, certainly. The only problem I have is with the amount of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, such as misplaced commas, capitalization of words that don't require it or a simple loss of a period at the end of the sentence. Other than that, I believe your story has great potential and wish you the best of luck with it :)

So happy you updated! I love this, and I'm excited to see how this plant helps Venus. Please update soon!

Great chapter
I love it
Can't wait find out what happens
Update soon

okay i don't mean to bug (yes I do but i don't want to be rude) who is in the lead and when will the next update happen?

I think Henry for sure!

Tristan. I think it should be him.

I don't have a tumbler account but I would love to see her with Henry!

Henry

I don't have tumblr. I say Tristian. They have history and deep down he must like her, so yeah Tristian.

I think Henry because he just sounds like the guy who would be her soul mate. He understands her problems and everything. :)

I like Tristian I think. Love the updates by the way!! Going with Tristian, I think would make it more interesting. Update soon, I can't wait to read more. (If you go with Tristian, make him work for it!) =)

The reason I think Tristian would be better is because of the fact that he was always there. In his ways he thought he was protecting Venus from the beginning. There are moments in the flashbacks that you write were you think "they were made for each other". You can tell that Tristian likes her a lot but he was shaped so much by the pack and society that he doesn't really know how to tell anyone or her, that all he can do is be a bully and outcast her to try and protect. Henry doesn't seem like a good fit to me because to me he like Venus for the "lack of wolf" aspect. She's not aggressive like the others, she automatically disliked him because he killed her father figure, and she is his little brother's best friend. Henry is kind of like her "Guardian Angel" instead of "soul mate"

Don't have tumblr. sorry :( but I really want it to be Tristian. If you want me to I can explain why.

henny

Henry