Serendipity. - Comments

Love it! (:

SO much love for this story, I especially loved Isaac's point of view.

i love it! i love that someone is writing a story that involves Issac and they're updating regularly! plus its very well written and i love reading it! very good job, keep up the good work :D

Comment swap sent me here. I never really took much interest in Teen Wolf, but I think that this story is really good. It's well written, the plot line is amazing, I think it is just all over a really great story. Keep up the good work!

HOLY GOD! I love this so far, and I love Teen Wolf. You're doing an awesome job with this story and I'm looking forward to chapter 6.

Okay, I just read the first chapter and I love it! I was hooked from the very beginning. I have never watched Teen Wolfe myself but from even the first chapter I would like to watch the show.

I like how you told everyone about how Ari found out that Scott was a werewolf. It had a lot of good descriptions and I found myself being able to imagine I was there was a love to be able to do.

I found the first chapter brilliant so I am going to read the rest which I have no doubt are are going to be just as amazing as the first. I like the feeling that I have to read more!!!

All right, I’m here from comment swap, and I just started watching Teen Wolf, so I am kind of reading, cringing away from the screen to avoid spoilers, so if I say something silly or hopelessly naïve, that is why.

Grammatically, you have some run ons. Like "I am not a damsel in distress nor do I intend to be one." could use a comma before nor since they’re both independent clauses. I got a little confused in the second chapter. Like, didn’t her dad just leave? Why’s he back five minutes later, and why does Isaac know all this stuff about Arianna when they’ve never really met?

It’s a nice little story. There’s just a few things that you need to watch.

I love this story! Please update soon! :)

Ahh, I loved it! this is purely amazing.

I liked it. I'd also like to agree with Chasing Cars that one part threw me off slightly. But otherwise this is a fantastic story. I love it.

I liked the chapter over all but it didn't exactly make total sense. Like why did her father come back home when had left like about 10 minutes before. And why did she randomly ask about her mother? Other than that it was great.

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So I don't usually watch Teen Wolf, but my friend was here to explain it all to me! She thinks your Fanfiction is amazing by the way, and so do I. Your a really good writer and I like the plot your using!

Keep writing and good luck

I simply loved the father daughter moment, it was brilliant. (:

I simply love this already! Honestly, I really hope you keep this going. I need to get my Teen Wolf fix some how during the off season!

love it already!

Don't worry cousin. The finale played with all of our emotions... Even mine :'( :')

Ahh, this got interesting! Oh my batman and robin the season finale was terrific, like I can't even handle the level of intensity the show is now!

I'm a huge teen wolf fan and I think I'm going to fall in love with this story.

<3<3<3 !!