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  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Idk wat to say about that "friend" of her. I feel so bad for her nd I'm so subscribed
    October 2nd, 2012 at 05:35am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please update soon!
    October 2nd, 2012 at 02:07am
  • fearless-forever

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    Dang, this just seems so surreal but the simple truth is it could happen to someone easily.
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • SunshineAce

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    Thank you! I fixed some of the stuff up now it should be good hope you keep reading...:)
    August 23rd, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • Rain_2010

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    First I gotta say it's a nice layout

    Now with your story,
    It's not bad, only problem I have is that everything is all one paragraph, there is no spaces seperating the paragraphs from the dialogue. Other then that you did a nice job with your writing and not overly explaining things. I can't wait to see what comes next. Also I havent found much if not any grammar or spelling mistakes.

    Keep up the good work.
    August 22nd, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • GiraffeGiraffes

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    I like the layout you made:) and this is so sad, but it's really good<3 can't wait for the update
    August 22nd, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • fearless-forever

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    This is heartbreaking
    August 22nd, 2012 at 10:46am
  • fearless-forever

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    Looks good, now what next?
    August 22nd, 2012 at 04:52am
  • SunshineAce

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    Thank you! And I made one I'm just trying to figure out how to put it on it :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • SunshineAce

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    Thank you! And I made one I'm just trying to figure out how to put it on it :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • SunshineAce

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    Thank you! And I made one I'm just trying to figure out how to put it on it :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • SunshineAce

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    Thank you! And I made one I'm just trying to figure out how to put it on it :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • GiraffeGiraffes

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    I like this and am looking froward to seeing where it goes, please update soon:) a custom layout would make it pop more too
    August 22nd, 2012 at 12:36am