The Unfortunate Story of Jonathan Cork - Comments

Chapter One: A very good first chapter, a quirky introduction to the characters, which I quite enjoy. Jonathan (hehe, we share the same name but I spell it Johnathan) seems as if he's a ill-tempered but also very nervous/apologetic at the same time. Like a swirled mess of emotions. The main girl seems to be level-headed and kind. This duo seems opposite of each other, so it's going to be interesting to see where that goes. By the way, I love Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.

I love the details, the layout, and just your whole writing style. This story has piqued my interest, hope you update soon, love!

Cool beans, as usual. You do good descriptions, and I know I've said this a dozen times before, but your age doesn't show. You write as well as most adults who have an extra decade of practice. I can tell you just get writing without needing to be taught.

this. is. pure. genius.

keep it up!! :D

I love this, it made me smile :) definitely reccing and subscribing. And Ams needs to ditch that Jonathan Cork dude, seriously lol

oh man i dig on this
it's so good i bow down to you

this is awesome; very interesting and unique. and i just love the layout, keep it up. oh, and by the way, the second chapter is not shit.. it's quite good.

This is so interesting. I love the way it's written. And of course, I've already fallen in love with Jonathan Cork. Sigh.

This seems like it'll be an interesting story.

oh my, i love this.
what a way to meet somebody.

I like the first chapter and his name. Jonathon Cork sounds so... fancy. I like their meeting all though his first round of cursing seemed unnecessary, at least a few of the phrases did. This looks like it's going to be very interesting. I shall return for the next chapter (:

I have a feeling I'm going to love this. Not much to comment on so far, but definitely looking forward to an update.

Jonathon Cork, you sound like an asshole with manners. I think we're going to be good friends.