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  • natalia romanova

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    I'm not sure how many times I've reread this story now, I've lost count. It is, without a doubt, my favorite story I've ever read. It's been about a year since its been updated and mostly I'm just hoping everything is okay! Anyway before I go on some long spiel about how much this story impacted me, I'm going to end this. So in conclusion, I absolutely love this story and I think its incredibly well written. You've captured each character perfectly and Daisy is probably my favorite original character ever. Great work!

    PS. I still have hope that one day this will be updated. :)
    July 19th, 2014 at 08:36am
  • cr8zzee4rum

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    I love this story! :D
    April 22nd, 2014 at 01:36am
  • blasttyrant

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    Weeeeeeeee! I love this story!
    I'm sorry to see it end.
    February 4th, 2013 at 06:26pm
  • blasttyrant

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    I just read the prequel, the deleted scenes, and this all in one day. Now please update again :)
    January 8th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • Lo_east

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    AW! LITTLE STEVE! SO CUTE!
    December 9th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • childrenofdivorce12

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    THESE CLIFF HANGERS ARE KILLING ME
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • wolfprincess1995

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    This is hilarious. Love it.
    December 2nd, 2012 at 06:05am
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    @ grr.cookie.rawr
    oh thank god. just let it be known that this is my favorite story I've ever read and I can't wait to read more!!! <33
    November 30th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • grr.cookie.rawr

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    It's definitely going to be updated again! And probably soon! I feel terrible for the unexpected hiatus, but a while ago my computer crashed and I lost everything, and as soon as I got a new computer I was swamped with finals. I'm working on the next chapter this very second, I promise!
    November 30th, 2012 at 12:34am
  • childrenofdivorce12

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    IS THIS SERIOUSLY EVER GOING TO BE UPDATED AGAIN?!?! I'M IN TEARS OVER HERE NEEDING TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN AND NOW I FEEL LIKE I'M NEVER GOING TO KNOW. I'M IN A GLASS CASE OF EMOTION. Y U DO DIS TO ME.
    November 29th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • Lo_east

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    There's a hurricane happening you should update
    October 29th, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • nomoretears

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    Haha that was really funny. I love her personality so much!
    October 25th, 2012 at 01:46am
  • dippydelight

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    More, More!!!
    October 22nd, 2012 at 03:13am
  • SHYLA01

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    OH WHAT! So good!
    October 18th, 2012 at 07:57am
  • Lo_east

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    And update being yours sweet princess.
    October 15th, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • Lo_east

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    Literally held my breath for the first part. WHERE IS BRUCE
    October 15th, 2012 at 12:23pm
  • katherine45ca

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    I feel nothing. I have decided to give up my emotions so I don't have to feel all the horrible things that you make me feel. AND EVEN WITH THAT EMOTIONLESSNESS I WENT INSANE WITH THIS CHAPTER! I LOVE Steve and DJ's fights. I love that you added the kissing clint part! Overall awesome chapter! :) Please update soon! :)
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:29am
  • S.dunning1510

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    They're argument seriously had me in hysterics, it was hilarious XD
    October 15th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • SHYLA01

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    oooohhhhhhh!!! I bet Steve will save her!
    October 14th, 2012 at 11:44am
  • maribaylock

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    omygosh I just found this story, and it is amazing!!!! augh I love it so much<3 please update soooon!!(:
    October 14th, 2012 at 05:46am