Porcelain - Comments

I am so happy to see you updated! Good chapter, I'm dying to find out what happens next! I hope you update again soon.

I want you to update soon!!!

This is amazing.

So they both got someone on the side; how interesting! I can't wait to see how this plays out

I loved the 1997 Lolita with Jeremy Irons... he is such a hunk but I love the fact you put a bit of a twist of Gerard and made him more rough and over protective of his property... is he going to kill someone that steals Olivia from him? Great job so far! I love it.

Oh man; one of the best cliffhangers ever

I was surprise she didn't stab him

This is really great. You are such a brilliant writer.

Poor Frankie.

Ah man I feel bad for Frank I wish she'd tell him

I wonder if she'll ever tell Frank

I really love this!

He makes it seem like punishing her means nothing grrrrr Gee >:( lol

Getting up early pays off! I'm really freaked out by Gerard, I always can't wait to read what's in his head; I'm too excited for the next one

Gerard is so sinister in this story but I love it for some odd reason.

Wow.... I am speechless, that was crazy

He is just pure evil for that

Dude I'm hooked I love how you write this it seems so real and it just draws me in :) I freaking love this! Gee is kinda scary in here but I mean he's still pretty hot lol

Wow! This is really interesting. More when you can. :)

God, he's scary