cries it's so gooood, I'm glad it's back. the chapter was fucking A man, really. I love this story so much it's almost unbearble. hope you will update sometimes soon :B
Aaaaaah yay another perfect updateXD I love his story so much.. Hopefully after all of my comments you know that by now, though..oh and I agree with harley91594.. Frank is pretty sweet:) I just don't know how to feel consistent about your characters.. Sometimes frank really pisses me off but then again so does Gerard.. It just shows that they're human and that you're great at characterizationXD Can't wait for the next update!,
Poooor gerard...:/ totally get his frustratuons and though I do want f and g to end up together, frank needs to realize that gerard needs cool down time and that I'm a little pissed at him. I mean wtf frank?? Ugh. Anyhow your writing is fantastical as usual and don't stress about updating. The long waits actually make me kinda love your story more, and then when I do see an update my day is made for like the next week. Wow that made no sense.. I guess what I should say is thanks for making my week:)
Ahh, it's been awhile again, eh? Not that I'm pressuring your or anything, but an update would be really, REALLY greatXD I was just going through my subscriptions for something good to reread and found this and, uh, yeah, reread it AGAIN. That's gotta make it, like, what.. the fifth time? Seriously girl, your writing is amazing. I'm so jealous of your skills. And I gotta know what happens next! So basically I'm just lettin' you know that I'm still thinking of you and this story and how brilliant it is.. God. Fuck yeah.
Oh, but you should seriously make a layoutXD Or find someone to make a layout for you, haaha! It'd be even more perfect then!
FRANK?!?!?!?!?D8 This is a fun story, really:) and your chapter length and pacing is really good, too:) and YESSSSSSSSSSSS AO3 FTW8D 8D 8D imma check u out;)
@ ShotToRemember You have no idea how much that comment means to me, because the reason this chapter took so damn long was at least 75% anxiety over writing the fight scene and it turning into a "he hit him. he hit him back." sort of scenario, so seriously thanks for taking the time to tell me what you think :)
@ Harley91594 Aww, well thanks for picking it back up again :D And yes, he certainly is :')
you can't imagine my gllleeee when i saw you'd updated8] I almost cried no joke.. eyes watering.. systems failing
yeah so, this.
this is great. this is awesome. i generally hate reading any sort of fight scenes because of how ridiculous the product usually sounds to me, but this is fantaspasmic. like.. it's very smooth and whatnot, so good work there. you're a great writer and you captured gerard's confusion and deliriousness (is that a word? is that how you spell that maybe-not-a-word?) perfectly. LOVE.
can't wait for the next update and i forgive you for taking so long, because i'd honestly given up on this story after "that thing that happened" and then when i saw that i was wrong and that you're back..... damn i'm effing happy. thanks, it means a lot:) every fic that updates makes that thing that happened seem a little bit more okay.
I used to read this story on DA but I don't go on there much anymore. I stumbled upon it here and I'm so glad I did, I remember loving this story. Frank is a tricky little fucker, isn't he? I did not see that coming!
Thank you all so much ahhh you're far more lovely to me than I deserve! I'm super glad you enjoyed though, and I'll get started on the next chapter STAT <33
sobs ok i hate how frank just thinks he can go all cocky and superior and i'm so mad at him like wow?
i feel so bad for gerard because he was already letting himself fall for frank (OR SHOULD I FUCKING SAY 413) and frank just used him and fucked around, without caring about how it would affect gerard emotionally.
i mean, sure the guy knew gerard would be destabilized, but he just didn't care if it hurt him deep. like, 'oh if it makes me win i don't give a fuck about your broken heart'. omfg i just hope gerard stays mad a loooong time (i mean if they survive you know) because frank apologizing will just end up with my fist in his pretty face.
so ok omfg the chapter was amazing and i missed your mad writing skills and i'm sO HAPPY that this story's back, you don't even know, i love it so sosososos sosososs so much. so yeah, alright, can't wait for the next update! hopfully in less than 7months ;p