Lock and Key - Comments

lyssaleigh718 (100)

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This was such a good story! I enjoyed reading it! I like how Sid is afraid to ask her out but dominate in bed! Great writing!

September 12th, 2012 at 09:20pm

pineapple55 (100)

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I loved the last line. And for some reason the visual of Amy tracing Sid's hair line really got me. There's a scene in the film Amelie where Amelie and Nino are lying in bed and she's stroking his hair, and it's just so sweet.

September 6th, 2012 at 08:47pm

hockey bliss (100)

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Perfection. I'm literally breathless!

September 6th, 2012 at 07:57am

jess123 (100)

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Greaaat read! Nice job

September 6th, 2012 at 03:13am

Bugalouie (100)

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Love ittt!
I agree with@Soupy

September 6th, 2012 at 02:13am

headintheclouds (100)

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I really liked it! Great work!

September 6th, 2012 at 01:06am

rubberbisquit (100)

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That was amazing. You have a fantastic prose :)

September 5th, 2012 at 11:22pm

soupy (100)

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Oh thank god ....I am soooo glad you wrote a Sid story - even if it was only a one shot. It has been a while since you wrote about him.

"Sidney pushed up onto one elbow in a move sexier than any porn" - the visuals you conjure up with your word send me over the edge!

If you want to reconsider your next venture - Sid is always an option in my books!

September 5th, 2012 at 08:40am

steph1984 (100)

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That was amazing

September 5th, 2012 at 08:13am