The Devil On Your Shoulder - Comments

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Ahh, I love this story. I feel so bad for Jack and asdfghjkl JALEX WHYY.

Poor Jack. Also, I really really love this.

I am dying at the way you left this.

omg have i ever told you how much i love this? fuckin' lots. Jack's going to be heartbroken though!!

@ pshhitshannah
yeah this was an experimental chapter I don't really know if it worked but hopefully all your confusion will be explained in the next few chapters!! Thank you I'm really glad you enjoy it

oh my god. i am a)slightly confused, but that happens a lot and b)very intrigued. good work love, can't wait for more

not fair.
Please let Jack be okay!

I'm going to cry

oh god when I said the hospital should call I didn't expect you to give him a fucking brain tumor *sobs* don't kill my baby :((

YOU'RE SO DOING THIS ON PURPOSE I CAN SEE THAT! do you love hurting me? I don't want them to cry and be hurt and omg please no? :( they belong to each other..

Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!:D

D: D: D: D:!!!!! Jack is a sweetheart and it kills me and what's wrong with him!?:(

Alex better forget Rian and fucking run over to Jack!!!

@ notabletoconnect @ ymaJelly18 @ hannahsings9752 I LOVE YOU GUYS SO MUCH AAAAHHHH

WHAT?!?! LOVEY DOVEY RIAN THOUGHTS AND A CLIFFY LIKE THAT WHYYYYY WHYYYYY WOULD YOU YOU DO THAT TO US WHYYYYYYYY?!? <falls to ground sobbing hysterically> ok, done spazzing. Nice chap, update soon pwease :3

nooooonoooonooonoooooNOOOOOOOO!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!? first rian and happy thoughts, and the showing him off crap THEN A CLIFFHANGER!?

wonderful chapter tho(:
update soon!

NO FUCKING WAY! what are you doing? :((((( the call better be from a hospital saying that Jack is about to die so Alex gets his shit together, because seriouslyRian?!?!?!?!?! my heart can't take that.. oh my gaaawd..

awww I got a shout out! :') And that was a cute chap, so happy Alex and Jack are back together :3 but "for now"? REALLY?! You evil little tease ;) JALEX FOREVER!!! <3

hskaihdowjso FUCK THIS IS PERFECT

@ ymaJelly18 @ hannahsings9752 hahaha thank you guys so much aw, there will be two chapters tonight:)))