Midnight Law - Comments

Oh gosh, now I don't know if I'm excited or scared ://

@ lo-botomy
I am glad you love it, she does open up a bit more to Billie, which is nice after everything they have been through in such a short time.

@ NerdGlasses
I am glad you are glad, but what's a story without that love triangle going on and I mean... what happens in Paris stays in Paris...

@ NerdGlasses
I am so glad you love it, and I am a fan of the Bourne movies as well so that is a big compliment for me. I dont like writing boring love stories, I always have to add in that little bit of action :)

to all of you! thank you so much for reading this, you guys are fantastic and I always look forward to your comments! Xx

Aww, I so much love this comeback. Billie is so sweet and Nora finally opens up more. :)

And I'm glad she's found her way back to Billie, emotionally I mean :)

I know I've said this before but I just have to say it again, I LOVE how much this reminds me of the Bourne movies! So much action and love and danger and lust <3

@ NerdGlasses
I wanted Mercury/Chase to not be overlooked, because as MINOR plot spoilers he is going to have a massive impact on the story, I know everybody is a bit team Billie, but prepare to be as up and Down as Nora...

@ xPoison_n_Blood
Like I said up there Chase is going to have a big impact on the story, and worry not, he has merely shown himself in the story, he will have an entrance and it will be grand :)

I liked it, but it was rather quick. I would have liked a grander entrance by Chase! Still awesome, though.
TeamBillie. FTW.
Ahaha

Oh and I AM really curious how you're ever going to explain all of this hahaha but hey, no rush, take your time, I'm happy as long as I have something to read ;)

Wow. I gotta say, I find Mr. Silver-eyed-marine pretty attractive, which is a big deal since I've never taken a liking to a male side character before. Still rooting for Billie though ;)

@ xPoison_n_Blood
I am glad, because there will be more spunk!

@ shakethesky
Just updated, I was too excited to write this one to care about all the other stuff.
Enjoy!

@ lo-botomy
haha oh you...
It will all come together soon...ish.

I love Nora's spunk.<3

what!! cant wait for the next part! please dont make us wait long!!

what? This is so confusing, I mean the things that are happening now not your writing. It's so exciting and almost frightening at the same time. My heart literally stopped when I read the last paragraph. Dear God, this story is amazing and you are a magnificent writer.

@NerdGlasses haha it seems Billie has an army of cockblockers on his tail. Only question is why? Seriously though... The CIA, the U.S. Marines? I dug myself a hole here haha on that same note though, poor Billie... Poor Nora, things make sense to Billie but he can't explain them and nothing makes sense to Nora, not even her own emotions let alone Billies. Ah so many plot twists :)

And just as I was hoping they would get some one on one time, the US marines come storming in :P

I'm so in love with your story! I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

@ NerdGlasses
Honestly I do not think there is a way to not love Billie, but yeah I like him to be both bad but a majority good. Wait till we find out his crimes...

@ MurderCity
Glad to here it! I myself like to keep myself on edge with the story so most of the time my chapter plans take a spontaneous turn for what I hope is the better :)