FrANK WHY SO MOODAY?? I find the character development inticing. The way Gerard realizes Frank's a teenager and his dead ex-wife's son and reminds himself constantly really brings in new elements. I like how Frank thinks of Gerard but still thinks it can all be normal so he doesn't stop to think at every moment. Plus, you guys make the couple have problems in a REALISTIC manner, which can be hard to find in fanfics, but amazing when done correctly. You have most definatly achived correctively-ness. <3
Okay I recommended this story months ago when I first started reading this, I don't think I've commented on this before. But now is my time to basically comment on how I have felt while this has been wrote.
That pretty much sums up everything. The one thing I did like was how Frank and Gerard didn't rush into the relationship with no regrets. It makes it more realistic that they both were regretting what was happening, but also that they couldn't stop what was happening.
Sorry I didnt comment on the other chapters, just saw the emails. And.....EEEEPPP OHH MY GAAAASHHHH THEYRE ADORABLE! well, they were uncomfortable anD NOW THEYRE GOING ON FRANKS FIRST DATE AND I JUST WANT TO HUG YOU FOR THAT YOU AMAZING PERSON YOU