Chasing Neverland - Comments

  • Carriah420

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    I plan to update it very soon, as I realize the neglect I have been paying this piece of work. After all, I can't be the only one infatuated with Peter Pan?
    February 27th, 2014 at 04:43am
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    February 2nd, 2014 at 04:30am
  • go.ally.go

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    Please keep writing... I know it's been a long time but this story is perfection, I'd love to read more.
    February 2nd, 2014 at 04:30am
  • MoonLitSkies

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    this is amazing. simply amazing. i need more.. please? :)
    June 21st, 2013 at 03:19am
  • sassygee.

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    I love this. I came here completely just because I wanted to find a wonderful Peter Pan story and I found it. Wonderful job. Please keep this going. I might cry if you don't. ;_;
    June 14th, 2013 at 09:17am
  • Trig-ger

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    its really good :)
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • Carriah420

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    @ HotRanger69 @ XxYouhadmeathelloxX
    I'm glad that you enjoy it!
    Keep reading! (:
    November 22nd, 2012 at 08:45am
  • HotRanger69

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    eep! i like it!! its so awesome!
    November 21st, 2012 at 05:03am
  • deactivatedError

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    Peter she isn't Wendy she is Willow! C'mon dude wake up and smell the freaking coffee! Lol anywho amazing chapter :)
    November 17th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • Carriah420

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    @ XxYouhadmeathelloxX
    Since they're extremely important characters, I thought it right to throw some type of background for them! I've been trying to play off of the fact that Willow is maternal and feels bad for the Lost Boys, even if they don't miss their life. Keep reading! (:
    September 30th, 2012 at 02:06am
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    Love how I learned about the lost boy's background info although some of it is pretty sad I'm dying to see what happens next :)
    September 30th, 2012 at 01:54am
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    Dude I freakng love this story it's super interesting and keeps me wanting more :) I'm super hooked!
    September 29th, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • Carriah420

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    @ TyMaeTrains
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    Thank you both! I try to make it believable, and I'm glad that you picked up on the play of Peter slowly aging. I thought it would make the story more believable. Keep reading!
    September 26th, 2012 at 06:50am
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    Love how well this is written and I love the imagery :)
    September 26th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • TyMaeTrains

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    I really like this. o.o Poor Peter for slowly growing up..
    September 26th, 2012 at 04:24am
  • Carriah420

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    I've been a big Peter Pan fan since I was a child, and thank you for the compliments on both my story and my writing style. I will try to update as soon as possible. Keep reading! (:
    September 24th, 2012 at 08:18am
  • Irviee

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    I always love Peter Pan since forever. And I also love this story so much. You write so goood. :)
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • Doggirl

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    i love this story! update soon please :)
    September 24th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • Carriah420

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    @ punkprincessheav
    So did I! Recently I watched Peter Pan: Return to Neverland, and couldn't shake the idea of writing a short story about it for days, so I finally sat down to begin typing it out. Keep reading! (:
    September 23rd, 2012 at 10:38am
  • punkprincessheav

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    Can't wait for more I always loved Peter pan as a kid :)
    September 23rd, 2012 at 08:36am