Sunflower - Comments

im in love

WOW! This is probably the first chaptered story on here that I've read in it's entirety and managed to finished without becoming somewhat bored. You managed to say so much in such a short story. It was interesting, and I liked the main character. To people on the outside, she just seems like the stereotypical bad girl type, but inside, she's well...as the Psyche said, human. It's great. Recommending.

Holy moly guacamole.
This was incredible. I don't even... this was just... completely unexpected and absolutely fantastic!
I'm actually really glad this is a short story it doesn't bullshit around like other long stories sometimes do. I love the doc too. She's quirky :P

Ugh this was wonderful. I read the short description and summary and was like oh my goodness, I ought to check this out and then I got so hooked and then it was over. This was absolutely great and I liked it very much. I think it was also pretty inspiring for me, just because i'm into a lot of psychological stuff and this really kind of opened my eyes. It was amazing.

I really liked the gif too, it reminded me of the TV show Shameless. I think that's kind of what I thought of along the way while reading. I love how Jess was portrayed, she was so real to me and I think it was a key part in keeping my attention with this story. I honestly really do like this. Like I said, it was great. c:

This was something out of the ordinary for me, but I loved every minute of it and couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. I loved the plot and I loved your writing style. I also think you had a fantastic control over character development, despite this story being so short.

I find that not a lot of people write about psychiatrists really well (admittedly, I'm one of them) so this was a refreshing change. You made it realistic and I loved that. =)

Fantasticly done. ^_^

This story seriously just grabbed me from the beginning. I was checking out the winners of that contest on Mibba & I swear once I started reading this, I just COULDN'T stop! You should've definitely won first place, it was THAT awesome! Great job, I loved it!

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Words can't even explain how I love this story and yet I am still talking.

But I guess I have to, because this story deserves a lot of recognition. It had everything, everything that could make a story a very extraordinary one. It was short, but I didn't care. You made it seem effortless making each chapter an awesome one.

It was beautiful, really. And I am so grateful to be able to read this.

I really enjoyed reading this! I think you did a great job of developing Jess a little bit each chapter. I like that she didn't immediately open up to the psychiatrist as well.

It also kind of sad that Jess was tormented so much by the death of her parents, which she thought she was the cause of, when in fact it was someone else. It made me happy when the psychiatrist helped her remember that night. I think you just did a fantastic job developing Jess, starting with her not wanting to open up, making her seem like she's a killer, to finding out that she really cared about her parents. When you first introduced the sunflowers, that's when I really wanted to know what happened that night with her parents. So I was glad that it wasn't her that killed her parents.

I thought you ended this really nicely as well! Gotta love a good happy ending. Fantastic job on this piece!

I loved that this was mostly dialogue which made it really interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and Jess was a great character.

This was really great, I hope you do write something similar in the future :)

Awe, I'm so sad this is over but I loved the ending <3 It felt like the ending of a book, where the author leaves it hanging in a way that ends it but still leaves the reader wanting more. Bah, amazing job, lovely <3

amazing ending :)
Loved every single detail and wouldn't want anything to be changed .
Your an amazing writer !

I really like this, looking forward to the ending :)

Wow.... just wow. The writing was unique and sorrowful. I liked Jess, she was so blunt and nonchalant and I love how you named the shrink Andrea. I can't wait for an update. -recommends, subscribes-

I'm in love with this story : )
I love Jess's personality , so nonchalantly and blunt and i'm glad that she's not crazy but it would have still been badass if she was : )
update soon !

I'm in love with this story. I haven't read something that I love so much in such a long time! The way you've written this is amazing, I love the dialogue between Jess and her psych. You can tell that the psych genuinely wants to help, but she isn't a pushover and she won't take no for an answer. So many stories I've read that involve psychologists or psychiatrists portray them as doctors who couldn't care less or people that are scared of their patients, which isn't true at all.

I love Jess's blunt personality. I feel so bad for her, because she's obviously been through a terrible trauma and then she was blamed for a crime she didn't even commit, but I genuinely do like her. She's so interesting and seems like she'd be a really good person if she wasn't into drugs and didn't get blamed for killing her parents. In other words, your character development is amazing and I adore what you've done with both characters.

I love how you ended the last chapter as well. You showed that Jess really is human, and I loved that. Ah, I can't wait for you to update this, even if there's only two chapters left <3

Definitely like this so far! I love the mysteriousness, and they way you write makes me want to learn more!

So much intrigue, omg! I'm loving this back and forth dialogue and all this mystery! I can't wait to see if the session will continue and your writing is lovely<3

I'm interested(: