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Hehe, LaSenza.. Sounds a lot like Hereford, with Yates' and everything..
LOVE THIS FIC!!!! Awesome job.. :D

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Just letting you all know the sequel is now up :) xxx

@ Nia_Flores
Haha calm down! I'm working on a sequel, don't worry :p xxx

I'm very mad at you!!! VERY VERY MAD AT YOU!!! Why?!?!? Where's my happy ending? Seriously, it pained me to read about her walking away! Not how I expected this to end. NOT AT ALL!!!

But great story though!

@ hello.heather
Haha calm down :p xxx

I'm actually going to quit my whole life because John and April aren't together right now.

@ pattycake
Thank you :) I'll be doing a sequel soon haha x

I reallllllly want the sequel to start now. I just read both of the stories, and it's refreshing to read a fanfic that's slightly different from the rest. Honestly, its the best I've read in a while. Also, they better get back together or ELSE!

@ ImFromMars
That's okay, thank you :) Hopefully there will be a sequel haha x

I'm sorry for being gone like forever, I read the first chapter of this but forgot to subscribe so I just figured you hadn't updated, then I decided go go on your profile yesterday and I saw that it was finished! But now I finished reading it and wow. I was not expecting that. The epilouge broke my heart, I've got tears in my eyes and all! You're such a great writer, I just want more and more!! :') x

@ WhoAreYouJudy
There will be a sequel dont worry lol x

SO....YOU ENDED THE PREQUEL SAYING THEYD EVENTUALLY GET BACK TOGETHER.... JUST TO MAKE A SEQUEL ENDING IT WITH THEM NOT TOGETHER.
SOUNDS GREAT.

@ WhoAreYouJudy
Yeah it's finished haha! I'm working on my other story for a bit now. I thought it would be a nice change to have a different ending for once, something more realistic and less predictable lol :P x

@ ccaassaa
Haha, if I was in her shoes I sure as hell would have! x

@ ninaclare
Haha! I don't know about a sequel. I have a few ideas in my head but I'm concentrating on my other story for now and I guess it depends on whether people would like one or not. I don't want them to get sick of John and April haha!

Thank you for all your comments :) xxx

I refuse for this to be the end! There better be a damn great sequel to this or I will be even more upset than I am with them not being together in the epilogue!!

It's not enough, she needs to move with him, oh my gosh.

WAIT WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS STORY IS FINISHED. NO STORY AFTERWARDS, NOTHING?!

MOVE TO AMERICA WITH HIM, AMERICA IS NICE AND FUN TRUST ME PLEASE COME.

@ WhoAreYouJudy
Yeah I dunno lol I didn't know much about the band when I started writing it, I just fancied John bigtime. Now I kinda know more about how/where they started out and that so I decided to incoportate a move to America lol. And thank you :) x

Ok so just read the prequel and this and oh my God I love this story. And I find it kinda odd you made them originally from the UK but Iz all good! Ah can't wait to see if she will move with them or not.

@ amandabenton22
Haha thanks! Only the epilogue to go now actually :( x