October 1st, 2012 at 06:33pm
Wow this is beautifully written, and I love the background. I suggest that you continue with this story; it would pay off in the long run. I will now subscribe. I have two small complaints though, nothing major. For one I have not read the original story so I suggest that you leave a link or something in the description. Last but not least there are a few spelling mistakes I found. Not trying to be a grammar Nazi because I make spelling mistakes too. Overall great story.
Sincerely,
Elise
Thanks, appreciate it :) except there's no original story to this, it's just a short story based off a song.