Porcelain - Comments

WOAH, i think this is really good, i wish here was more so i could keep reading this but, all good things met come to an end.... XD

I already feel like this story is going cause me a heart ache (in a good way). There were little words, but from the narrator's perspective, the words were very powerful. Over all, I enjoyed the first chapter very much, and I hope I can read more :)