Let's Pretend It's Love - Comments

I really liked this! I liked that you didn't have a name so the readers could insert them in - I definitely did, especially when Harry came up to the girl. The title and the song really fit well with the story. The only criticism I have is that you switched tenses, but otherwise I thought the idea was well written. Thank you for entering!

Agh, this was just all around amazing! It was the cliche type of story but still it wasn't cliche at all. I don't even know. I love the idea of not giving her a name - yes for the readers. And she really did pretend it's love aha. I was wondering how this would turn out considering how she despised the thought of partying but you did a brilliant job!

That was really clever. I was wondering when her name would have been mentioned, but it never was. I like that. Genius idea. :D

I really like that you didn't give the girl a name! That's really cute and unique. And, damn, who wouldn't hook up with Harry Styles at a party and disregard any logical thought?
To be honest, I was worried about this song being difficult to write a good story, but you've proved that wrong! I really liked this. :)

Thanks again for entering my contest! xx

This story is amazing!
I'm in love!
I hope you update it again really soon!
Please?

I loved it! I put myself in the story, thanks to the fact that the girl has no name or description, and didn't regret a single bit. (: thx love