Pawn - Comments

AH, RYEOWOOK. NO. Evil man. -.-
AH, KYU. NO. DON'T TRUST HIM. ALSKDJFA;SDF
Sora. -.- Don't take coffee from a stranger. That was not cool, drugging coffee Kyu!
Haha, I like the two of them's final words. xD
Great update! I feel bad for Sungmin though. Poor guy. :(

Ooooohhhoooooo!!!! I like this, I like this a lot. xD
It'll be very interesting. xD

EUNHYUK, LEETEUK, SIWON, KYUHYUN! THE FEELS!!!!!

Okay, so I was thinking Mr. L is Sungmin, but I'm not entirely sure...I love how Siwon's the boss instead of Leeteuk, like what someone would usually do since Teukie's the leader. But Siwon's got that swag so it totally works. :)
Oh, Kyuhyun you just stating stuff totally works for you.

Narrating in present tense is a tough thing to do and I applaud you for managing to do it so wonderfully. I'm really looking forward to this!

I just. I can't. This is going to be AH-MAZING!