I don't even know what to say. I truly believe there are no words to describe this. It's beautiful, magically beautiful. Perfect. I've read some amazing art on here, but never like this. You deserve a standing ovation. MagnÃfico.
That's awkward. I just realized that this is a one-shot. In which case, it makes way more sense. And it just makes it a thousand times better, if that is even possible. I really love how everything is worded. And I think you did an amazing job with this!
Your writing is wonderful and so poetic. Your first chapter flows extremely well. And it also leaves the reader with a lot of questions. I hope that you update soon!
I enjoyed reading it. It's different, as I don't particularly read such things. What enticed you to write such a piece? Apart from the yearning of your Inkheart of course :)
A beautiful piece. I can't really criticize anything about it, it was perfect. I really like the way it conveys who a dedicated writer feels about writing, as if it's not a hobby but an extension of themselves. Good work!