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  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    @ P!ATDandMCRlover
    Thank fuck. I'll definitely read it :)

    I just NEEDED to know that they do end up together <3
    February 22nd, 2013 at 07:28am
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    okay to all of you. there are two songs that i have been playing over and over and they sort of explain a lot in my eyes so you should listen to them and see if they help you. one of them im sure you know its the world is ugly, studio version and stage version. the other one is a song by gwen steffani called wonderful life. lisiten to the lyrics and you will seeeeeeeeeee -drifts away in the breeze-
    February 21st, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • DidiSaysHi

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    why do i have the feeling that the sequel is going to make me sad?

    but thank god you already said they will end up together! i will keep it in mind while cry like an idiot because you splitt them up :D
    February 21st, 2013 at 04:08pm
  • samoosifer

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    okay heres a little bit of an explanation: i'm putting their relationship to the test. try was about them getting together, you know the whole honeymoon stage and it also had like warnings of what was to come. aim is basically putting the strain on their relationship to see if they could survive it. succeed is less about the 'war' thing and more about the success of the guys. i dont want to reveal too much but i dont want you guys freaking out okay of course they will be together in the end. i already know how im gonna make that happen yay you remember mr stump and miss bellato dont you? :D
    February 20th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Okay, this has been kind of plagueing me... Does it get better for them in the sequel, like, have you planned to have a happy ending for them?

    i hope you did...
    February 20th, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Love it <3 please write the sequel soon :)

    WHAT THE FUCK?!?!? No, please don't do that :( they fucking NEED each other!!! </3
    February 20th, 2013 at 11:17am
  • TechniColorScream

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    Gahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! What the freaking-god-almighty-bitching-fucking hell was that all about now I'm dying to know whys up with that shit. You time jumped he fuck out of your story lol...hurry up goddammit I want to know more!!!!!
    February 20th, 2013 at 10:56am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Love it! <3 please update soon :)
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:09am
  • DidiSaysHi

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    damn! this is so good
    i love your story
    February 11th, 2013 at 11:04pm
  • DidiSaysHi

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    damn Mibba!
    it hasn't informed me that you updated -.-
    and the whole time i was like "ohh... why isn't there an update? :("
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    but at leat i was able to read 5 chapters at once :D

    and holy fuck! i really thought that he shoot gerard
    you're really good in this hallucination thing.. i never recognise them :D

    love this ♥
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:21pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3 please update soon :)

    Don't kill Frank or Gerard, kill Cole because he's technically important to this story and needs to die...

    I totally understand the need to kill characters in stories xD one story that I wrote had an explosion in the very beginning that killed a bunch of people, then later on, one of the main characters gets shot, but he survives that and ends up dying of septicemia (blood poisoning) from an infection in the wound
    And then the other main character kills himself, so effectively I killed everyone in the story...
    February 7th, 2013 at 12:35pm
  • samoosifer

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    i had only found out there were two just the other day haha. but d.c is like next to jersey or whatever right? this is difficult for me cause i live in nz and know nothing about the states and shit so help me out guys :D where is the other washington? is it close to cali?
    February 3rd, 2013 at 12:54am
  • babsley112

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    The whole Washington thing really confused me 'cos I couldn't decide if it was D.C. or State for a while (I live in Washington State, so that always gets me :P)
    February 2nd, 2013 at 05:29am
  • hubbabubbba120

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    im i n love with this story thnx for the update update soon please ive been with this story from like chapter 12 of try :D
    January 30th, 2013 at 10:23pm
  • DidiSaysHi

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    ahhh i love this story :) :)
    it's just as good as Try ♥
    you better update soon ;)
    :D
    January 26th, 2013 at 01:20am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3 please update soon :)

    Please don't kill Gerard or Frankie
    January 23rd, 2013 at 10:19am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this story <3 please update soon :)
    January 17th, 2013 at 03:18pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this <3 please update soon :)
    January 16th, 2013 at 03:24pm
  • babsley112

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    I can't wait for the next one! <3
    January 13th, 2013 at 05:02am
  • samoosifer

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    @ not_the_average_teen
    dont ground me D: im already grounded right now dont i cant handle being groundeddddddddd
    January 8th, 2013 at 08:28pm