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  • petrichor.

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    I really like this story. First of all, Aurora is one of the prettiest names I've seen and second, she isn't ordinary. Usually, the characters are so nice and bubbly, but Aurora is the complete opposite AND I LIKE THAT SO MUCH.

    You should continue! :)
    April 7th, 2013 at 02:29pm
  • imacrimiminal

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    update!! you're a good writer. Don't lose motivation! :)
    April 7th, 2013 at 10:46am
  • gazingatstars

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    progress in their relationship. This is so great!
    January 14th, 2013 at 02:10am
  • notllamadelrey

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    No more fan girl characters. This is brilliant!
    January 14th, 2013 at 12:24am
  • kailixx

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    I love this! I totally love that Aurora is a bitch and also that first chapter was perfect.
    January 6th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • Flowerr

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    I was a bit confused with the change but I loved it!!!
    January 3rd, 2013 at 09:52am
  • somethingbittersweet

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    this looks good! I like your writing style and I absolutely love the way you write the 1st chapter. Do continue! Can't wait to see how this goes :)
    January 3rd, 2013 at 05:16am
  • Flowerr

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    I really really loved the way chapter one two were written, chapter three and four just seem a bit rushed and don't have much going on. The way you write though is amazing and she should be a bitch but try having at least Judithbe someone who will and can stop her when she goes a bit too far, like someone who's capable of hitting her soft spot. Otherwise she's just a one dimentional 100% bitch of a character. Keep writing pleaseeee<3
    December 18th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • Flowerr

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    Ahhhhhhh! I think I could really end up loving this story ((: and your writing is really good! Update?
    December 10th, 2012 at 11:04pm
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