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  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    This had a really lovely ending.
    April 12th, 2013 at 09:31am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I just let out the most disgusting groan.
    I just read this entire series. Well done, by the way.
    It was about chapter 22 that I realized I probably have anxiety and should talk to my psychiatrist because I already have one for fuckssake. It was kind of great and terrible how I got the knots in my stomach and urges to bite my tongue and cheek along with her every time she got anxious.
    April 12th, 2013 at 08:55am
  • vices

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    omg "I have a heavy heart too."
    KrisTINA OMG THAT WAS JUST
    OH MY GOD
    THAT IS SO PERFECT
    I LOVE IT SO MUCH
    THIS IS SO SWEET OH MY GOODNESS
    omg and the bobby pins part is literally the story of my life LOL

    and Bright Eyes is perfect
    I'M EXCITED FOR THIS FLUFFY EPILOGUE BTDUBS
    April 12th, 2013 at 05:49am
  • zandra

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    PERFECT. :) and the last line makes me really happy because I love edward sharpe (not sure if it was intended but I hope it was!). I could not have hoped for a better ending. I absolutely loved it. :)
    April 12th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • Hipsterism

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    Wow. This story. And this chapter. And Daria and Harry and everything about them.
    IT'S ALL PERFECT OKAY. Seriously I'm in love with it all. It's just SO GOOD.
    There's a bittersweet feeling now that this is over, but I'm happy knowing they got their ending.
    And I'm also excited for the sequel. Which I hope will have them in it!!
    Basically I love your writing and I'm looking forward to what you do in the future!!
    April 12th, 2013 at 02:16am
  • show me love

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    “Home is wherever I’m with you.” In Love
    All the things he said he'd do for her.. In Love
    I'm so sad this is basically over Cry
    I absolutely love this story. It's brilliant. You write beautifully. And gah, I'm going to miss Darry/Haria.
    April 12th, 2013 at 01:35am
  • peggy carter.

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    oh my god i love you
    and i love bright eyes
    and daria
    and harry
    and this story
    i can't believe it's only got an epilogue to go
    that was beautiful<3
    April 12th, 2013 at 01:12am
  • iron and wine.

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    I'm going to cry.
    This story is my favorite.
    Harry, my poor baby.
    And Daria, I just want to hug her.
    This is absolutely gorgeous, girl In Love
    April 12th, 2013 at 01:09am
  • hollywood .

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    I can't believe that's the end. I'm so happy they're together, and I can't believe he confessed that to her! Your story was absolutely amazing.
    April 12th, 2013 at 12:57am
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Oh my god that was even more amazing than I thought it could ever possibly be! Harry and Daria are just perfect and I can't wait to read the epilogue! xx
    April 12th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • carousels;

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! THAT WAS THE PERFECT ENDING! UTTER PERFECTION. HARRY IS SO ADORABLE. CAN I HAVE ONE FOR CHRISTMAS? HE SHOULD SHOW UP AT MY DOOR LIKE HE DID FOR DARIA. OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER. WHAT TO DO WITH MY LIFE????? DARIA AND HARRY ARE THE PERFECT COUPLE. FHEJXKKENCORONFIELSKDNOR.
    April 12th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • style.

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    What an ending! Gah, I'm sad to see this story end. :c I cried while reading the last chapter, and just... AHHH. It has been truly amazing reading this from start to finish! You are an incredible writer. (:
    April 11th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • copeland

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    BEAUTIFUL. You truly have a gift at writing!
    April 11th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • cassyandra12

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    Is there gonna be another story?? !! It can't be over!
    April 10th, 2013 at 01:46am
  • theepretendpenelope

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    What will I do when this is over?! This is too good!
    April 10th, 2013 at 01:09am
  • crazygirl19

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    HARRY. Harry Harry. Oh my word, that was so emotional. She has no choice! She has got to forgive him. That was so perfect, what Harry did for her. I'm not ready for this story to end - I think I just might cry. :( this was such a perfect story!
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:40pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    She's GOT TO forgive him!!! That's just the only way to end this. I could have swore she was going to tell her mom and Jeff "hey sorry that you cooked this beautiful dinner, but I need to book it to NYC right now and win my boyfriend back. Later!" Why Daria?! WHY!!!!! He loves you, you love him, you got accepted to go back to Birmingham, and the stars have aligned to show you that it's meant to be! GO FOR IT!!! You deserve this happiness!

    And I loved that line about Harry's lack of fishing abilities. That was really good! I want to say that!! Harry's perfect, again. He's taking too much blame. A relationship goes both ways. He shouldn't have to be the one to constantly fix things, she needs to try as well.

    They're gonna fix things. It's Christmas, they'll b happy at Christmas! <333
    April 9th, 2013 at 04:00pm
  • somethingbittersweet

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    :''''''''''') :'''''''') --> incase you dont know this mean tears. TEARS OF MY DARRY FEELS.
    April 9th, 2013 at 02:15pm
  • show me love

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    That chapter was just perfect Cry
    I'm not ready to say goodbye to this story Cry
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:04am
  • Hipsterism

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    THAT WAS SO ADORABLE WOW.
    Okay so that hit me in the feels.
    I am so in love with this I can't wait to see how the conclusion is!!
    Looking forward to the next chapter and the sequel of course :)
    April 9th, 2013 at 06:52am