I Want You - Comments

Please update soon! Love this story!

Oh my goodness, you're back! Yay! I loved seeing into to her past, and I really loved John's POV. Please update soon. I forgot how much I missed this story.

this is great. I love their banter, and I would like to know more on why she's so broken, why she's a different person from the person she was. (well I mean I know jayden and whatnot, but like a flashback or something.) ANYWAYS, this is really good, so por favor update soon?

I am loving this!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!

I am so in love with this story! Please update soon !

I just caught up with this story and I am very excited with where it's going. It's great! Can't wait for more updates!

i love this chapter too much. from the fight with mel to her moment with john, it was all lovely! i love your writing style. update soon please ☺

Progress <3

i was so happy when i saw that you updated! this is one of my favorites and i love their friendship (i'm not sure that's the right word). update soon please ☺

i actually laughed when john was yelling at her bc she deserved it. she needs to understand he's not a jerk, haha. please update soon ☺

Why cant she just not assume everything he does is going to turn out bad

@ dark11wolf
never... or at least not yet ;)

@ collidewiththesky thank you soooo much for all of your comments! haha I'm so glad you like the story :)

She really cant even give him an inch can she

they finally had a decent(ish) talked and she probably won't even remember :( anyway this was great and i can't wait for the next one! ☺

I want the next chapter... Now! This was great!

loved this! update soon please ☺

I like it! I like it alot! Looking forward to more :)

Excited for more

their banter is hilarious! i can tell this is gonna be one of my favorites ☺