Lullabies - Comments

I don't think you understand how hard I cried. They where like, body wracking sobs until I finally fell asleep. So depressingly good.

I cried so much at this. very well written <3

You already know I love it! But, since I write long well thought out comments for everyone else, you get one too. You were very descriptive and got me crying also. You created emotions for the readers, and that's one of the reasons people will read this one shot more than once. The italicized writing turned out good, like I recommended for you to do! I love how most of the story was a flashback. I think that you should write more, because you are very good! This is well-written and I love the layout! I recommended this.

I'm so happy you decided to post this, even though I'm writing this with some blurry sight because I'm still crying.
God, this is so wonderful and sad and I love all these emotions