His Horny Little Slut - Comments

@ mrsmshadz
They are both band and gang members.

One more thing, are they gang members or band members?? Summary says gang, story says band??

Loved it. 2 things tho, 1. In the first chapter when they were in the room he had taken off his hat, subglasses and jacket. Chapter 2 he does it again?? Crazy! And 2, before they had sex, she had already agreed to be his sub, well that's what I got out of it. Going to start the sequel!

@ xMandiblesx
Thank you very much. :)

I'm really loving this! Haha I like how stern and dominant Matt is acting. I like you're writing style and this story is coool. :)

That was awesome! Can't wait for the full story!

YAY! Full story!!!! <3

Oh wow...even before I read the last chapter which was smut galore I already knew it was going to be super hot. Damn, I think I'm going to need to change my underwear now- Matthew Sanders, you dirty boy. Having said that, I don't think many of us would mind being spanked by him, you know? I liked the build up to the story and how I really got to know the characters, rather than just thrusting two people together to fuck in one chapter of a story- at least this time there was some sort of history behind it.

The smut was, of course, wonderfully hot and steamy, and the spanking...well, I think I already made my point up there about how much I enjoyed reading that part! I loved how he called her Pet rather than something like slut or whore, it was really sweet to choose that nickname! I don't believe that was your first time writing BDSM, and I will defiantly be subscribing to the full story when it comes out! Great job honey- and thank you so much for entering the contest!

Yeahhhh full story :D Loved it :D It was hot :P

Loved it! And I'm so excited you're doing a full story :)

yay a full story of this...damn those girls walking in before matt got his answer...any way i love it :)

Not bad for your first BDSM..I can't wait for the full story

yay! I'm so excited to read a full story on all of this. It's so well written and gosh I just love it! Can't wait

You should definitely turn this into a full story I like where this is heading!

i loved it and I kinda chuckled at the "This isn't a brothel it's simply Brian's house."

Loved it!

I love how blunt he was about it all. It's not like you walk in to a house with people having sex everywhere everyday. This a good very good for your first time writing it. I honestly think you should make it into a story

i really like where this is going and I can't wait to read more. although I do have tp say, I think this should move on from just a three shot. I think you should continue this story beyond the contest. Im sure you'd get a bunch or recs and subs. A lot of people continue stories they started for contests. Just a suggestion I hope you keep in mind. Can't wait for the next update.

loved this :) can't wait for next chapter :)

I love this!