The Tire Swing - Comments

villain. (160)

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This was just... perfect.
I actually can't think of a proper word to describe what I think of it, so perfect will have to do. I loved this so, so much.
Your writing never fails to leave me in awe and wanting more.
You did a fantastic job.

April 23rd, 2008 at 04:19am

prescription (100)

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amazing.

April 23rd, 2008 at 02:23am

we are galaxies. (100)

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I love love love this.
It's sweet but not too sweet and I just love it.

April 23rd, 2008 at 12:50am

oxford comma. (200)

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I like the...not drowsy, that's not the correct adjective, but warm, water sliding over rocks tone.
My favorite lines:

just like the family they were trying to be.

the family newsletter Brendon’s mother sent out every month. Just today, just a family.

April 22nd, 2008 at 08:50pm

i defy you stars. (250)

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mmm. i like it. drabble is niice
:)

April 22nd, 2008 at 08:23pm

folie a dru. (1270)

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New drabble.

Happy reading!

xoxox
-Dru

April 22nd, 2008 at 08:14pm