Your summary is so captivating! This story is captivating. I love your take on the whole 'Death" plot line and the name "Thanatos" is so... very very. I don't know how to explain it-- its sexy.
I think this will be an awesome story. The plot seems good, and I love that movie too, sooo, yea, haha. This should be pretty awesome. Can't wait to read more!!!
I've been wanting to read a story about Death since I saw Meet Joe Black, this one looks good. ;) I loved the summary, it pulled me into reading this. Great job!