February 20th, 2013 at 03:11pm
Party Animals - Comments
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Heartbreak In Stereo; Part 2: Seriously, again; WOW!!!!!!! Absolutely perfect chapter in every way, not just because of what's happening between Party Poison and Fun Ghoul but also because, again, it's very well written. It's just the right length and it's totally believable. Keep up the amazing work with this.February 20th, 2013 at 12:07pm
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Heartbreak In Stereo: WOW! Absolutely brilliant chapter and actually, just the right length. It needed to end with that line. PerfectFebruary 20th, 2013 at 11:53am
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Love it <3 please update soon :)February 20th, 2013 at 11:24am
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Mission Reunion: again, excellent chapter. The only thing I would point out is that you referred to Party and Ghoul as Gerard and Frank just a big too early. Of course, we all know who they really are but if you're a reader who doesn't know anything about MCR and the Fabulous Killjoys, it could become confusing. Tha is my only small criticism; I love this storyFebruary 20th, 2013 at 10:53am
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I can tell I'm going to become obsessed with this story! New Recruits has set the story up even further and is a very well written chapter. Seriously love this so farFebruary 20th, 2013 at 10:34am
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Love the prologue! I spotted just one spelling mistake but other than that, your grammar and punctuation is good. Great start to a story and it's a refreshing new take on Frerard! It doesn't start in the generic way most Frerards start; you know what I mean, "my alarm went off at 7am and I immediately hit snooze but my mom was determined to get my ass out of bed." .... You know, that kind if thing. I love that you started this with a completely different point of view. Very goodFebruary 20th, 2013 at 10:24am
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Love it <3 please update soon :)February 15th, 2013 at 07:29am
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askdla;. Also, I read this in their voices. lol (:February 5th, 2013 at 06:19am
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This is amazing <3 please update soon :)February 2nd, 2013 at 01:30pm
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oh my gosh!!!! Poor Fankie :c *Cries* I love this though!February 1st, 2013 at 11:07pm
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I love this <3 please update soon :)February 1st, 2013 at 02:30am
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@ Toxic-Cherry
I am. I have a chapter near completion but my frerard needs to be updated too so im working on that. And thanks so much. :) first comment woot!January 30th, 2013 at 05:48am -
This is really good so far. Well developed characters and an interesting idea for the plot. I hope you continue writing. :DJanuary 30th, 2013 at 05:14am
Oh thank you! I'm glad you love my story :) Constructive criticism is always welcome and often encouraged with me so I appreciate it and I see my typo now haha oops. Thanks so much!