Hearts of the Used - Comments

  • robyn alicia

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    I’m really enjoying reading this. I think you’re doing a brilliant job; the title and summary hooked me straight away and now I can’t get enough of what you’re writing. I think you’re doing brilliantly and I can’t wait for another update. Keep it up! :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 11:13pm
  • Star Angel

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    please update soon like right now lol
    February 5th, 2013 at 06:23am
  • robyn alicia

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    I'm enjoying this!
    February 3rd, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon
    February 3rd, 2013 at 09:08am
  • Fallen_Angel..

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    amazing job!
    February 3rd, 2013 at 03:45am
  • robyn alicia

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    This is really well written, I was hooked from the start and I think you're doing a really good job! :)
    January 30th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear authors, first of all the comment virginity is mine, yay!!! :-) The comment swap thingy brought me here and I'm not complaining, ot at all. I just loved this. <3 Brownie points for the story's title and the summary, especially the end of the summary which pulled me in right away. I also liked the titles of the chapters, and the title of the second chapter should be capitalized like the others. At the first chapter you wrote Alexandria instead of Alexander once and it confused me a bit. I like the descriptions and the mystery going on. I can't wait to see how your characters will develop. I have subscribed and I can't wait for more. ~Marian
    January 30th, 2013 at 03:46pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear authors, first of all the comment virginity is mine, yay!!! :-) The comment swap thingy brought me here and I'm not complaining, ot at all. I just loved this. <3 Brownie points for the story's title and the summary, especially the end of the summary which pulled me in right away. I also liked the titles of the chapters, and the title of the second chapter should be capitalized like the others. At the first chapter you wrote Alexandria instead of Alexander once and it confused me a bit. I like the descriptions and the mystery going on. I can't wait to see how your characters will develop. I have subscribed and I can't wait for more. ~Marian
    January 30th, 2013 at 03:46pm