Ahh, I love this, the characters the mystery and your writing! The only problem is you keep ending the chapters on the worst cliffhangers, haha. Write very fast! xx
I may have only read the first chapter, but already, I am hooked!!!!! You write beautifully. You create stunning imagery and I love your charachters already. Seriously, this us the best start to a story I've read herein mibba. Huge pat on the back.
I just started reading this today and I must say, it is amazing. You are a beautiful and creative writer. I was captivated with this story from the first chapter. I can't wait to read more.
The writing in this story reminds me of the first chapter of the fellowship of the ring, it's quaint and very warm. Especially the part where she says, "I could safely say that it was why were best friends in the first place."
All of the names are so fairy like haha, it actually surprised me when they got in a car and rode passed suburbia. Except for raven Diablo of course haha, which I must add is a very badass evil name. At first I was picturing some woodland tree girls or something haha. Especially when you have little phrases like "blanket of stars" haha, it's cute. I can't wait to see where this is going :)
I don't have to say update soon because I know you will ;)