I don't know if you're coming back but wish you would! Loved this story! And I was scrolling through old stories and remembered this one! Would be great if u updated sometime soon!
im sooo happy i found this story again!!! and ohhh myyy goooddd!!!! its blows my mind that a three year old is more mature than a grown man...you NEVER say that to such a young child like he has major issues that he needs to deal with and when he gets angry he does NOT need to take it out and fen and eli!!! thats just not fair at all and you for damn sure dont call him names and i cant wait til james finds out i!!!!!! i just feel like hell snitch om jacob or they will all be together and elie calls him that then i see shit go down and i didnt know jacob was such a hockey expert...how about he go through a day in the life of an nhler and id put a ton of money he doesnt last an hour of practice!!! what a piece of shit!!! fen can do wayyyy better than him for sure!!!! i hope this gets updated soon ive been waiting a while to see how this was coming along and i must say its coming along great!!!! :)
Honestly sometimes I'd question who the child is here, Eli or Jacob. Please, when the battle you choose to fight is against someone using Hooked on Phonics you know you've plateaued to the guy who argues for the fun of it. Can he really not cook anything for himself. Wash some vegetables and make a salad, make a PB&J, get some popcorn, whatever. Is he expecting she'll see James during the game and that while watching score she'll suddenly fall in love with him again? Because he's the kind of control freak to the point where its not a huge leap in logic to think abuse is a factor here. And my money is the Eli will rat out to James that Jake called him 'a little shit' or someone else whom will hopefully make Fen understand that she's not the only one taking Jake's blow, but that her son is being emotionally abused by this fine asshole. Also if he could 'do that with his eye closed' I ask, where's your NHL contract, dumbass? Update soon!
She needs to dump Jacob's sorry ass, he should be able to feed himself and not treact sweet little Eli like that. She needs to go back with James, now. Great update, can't wait for more :D
I love this story, it's so intresting. I have a feeling Jacob is beating Fen. Plus I can't wait to see more backstory on James and Fenwick and even Eli.