Ménage à Trois - Comments

Ménage à trois gotta love the French, right?

But besides the title, hooking me in, the summary was just as good. It set the tone perfectly for the story. I like how there's fantasy and romantic elements wrapped up into this. The layout is dark and I feel something exciting and kinky is going to happen or will come eventually.

I adore Brian and Zachary's relationship. They're from the band Avenged Sevenfold (of course you know that) and I have heard of them, even listened to a couple of songs, but enough about my little background history of them. Their relationship is bittersweet. And I love those kinds of relationships when written well; you express the idea of fantasy pretty well too because at first, I believed Zach for a while. And I kept thinking that maybe Bri is very drunk and his reality/fantasy world is coming into play.

Brian, the bad boy dropping the idea that an exclusive club really exists opened the door for Zach, there's nothing to lose or gain in his favor and that’s when things will get crazy! Their dialogue was the best parts and their interactions, funny and seemed natural to read. What a lovely way to start a first chapter, and despite my lack of knowledge about the people you're writing about, I'm more interesting now

this is an excellent first chapter!!! i'm intrigued and excited to see what will happen. I loved how Brian called the chick a "Bar Wench" and she tossed a shot in his face....
Please update soon!!

"Bar wench." LMAO BRIAN. What an adorable jerk, that one. Can I just say that the way you wrote him in this is priceless. Perfect and priceless. And the image of him with a wet napkin stuck to his forehead? IT MADE ME LOL OKAY, FOR REAL.

This was so good! Such a perfect opening. I'm definitely intrigued and want to know just what this club is all about :P Please update soon! <3

This was a great first chapter. I'm totally intrigued and I hope to read more soon!

I'm intrigued! Looking forward to the next update!

I love it already! Can't wait for the second part. :)

Im intrigued!! And I also loved " Bri Bri"(<------- can't believe he called himself that:D)in this!!! I can't wait for more. You have great humor:)

This seems like it's going to be very entertaining, oh and Brian... hilarious! Can't wait for more!

Loved the first chapter. It definitely laid the foundation and built some suspense. Can't wait to see what you so with this!!

It's really interesting:)

Loving this so far. Brian was pretty entertaining in this

OH LOOK HOW PRETTY.