Angel Eyes - Comments

Please revive this!

Love your story

loved it!

Lol she's definitely gonna meet him there. Happy that you updated, I hope the next one is coming much sooner!

Oh I wonder what he's gonna say!

update please its to good <3

oh great, now they've come across the weapon..update again!

I love it! can't wait for the next update!!

Glad you updated...hope the next chapter is soon..& hopefully she stops with this hate-fest for Klaus.

Glad you updated again, but kinda hoping you decide to update the next chapter [11] a lot sooner.

Okay so you aren't exactly following the TV show then yeah? & how old is Adriana really? because if she's just 300-500 years old, for her to be calling herself 'ancient'..well I would expect her to be 1000 years old like Niklaus because didn't you say he turned her when he got turned? I'm sure he didn't wait years to do that...but anywho..this story is interesting and has great potential. I'm just confused with the dates & ages.

How exactly is Adriana a Salvatore? Is she blood related or just an old friend? Because she had said "Stefan killed their father", so I'm a little confused.

Hope the next update is soon!

Great, bit short though.
Update soon! :)

Love it

Ooohh I love Rebekah, I hope they will stay friends. Great chapter, rather short though. Please update soon! :D

I really enjoy this story. It's not cliche and has much potential. I am with feedmetothewolves; the story is a little confusing when it comes to her age. If I recall correctly, Stefan and Damon are roughly 150 years old. All in all, I think your writing style is good and the plot seems promising. I'm eager to get to more interaction with klaus

I am really enjoy this story and can't wait to see where it is going.

This story is excellent, I really really enjoy it, but there are a few things that are a tad confusing. Is she the Salvatores sister or is she an older vampire that is just close to the brothers. I just feel as you're making this character many different things, like she's the sister of the Salavatores but she's like 300 years old. It just doesn't make sense to me. And I don't want to make you feel offended or anything that's not my intention at all I just want to get things cleared up because I really do believe this story has major potential.

Also, I'm not really sure if you're following the show or the book because in the show, when Klaus knew Stefan it was during the 20's and he compelled him to forget him and Rebekah both when Mikael came to Gloria's Club. That's when he put the dagger in Rebekah for 90 odd something years also when Lexi came to get Stefan back on the wagon. I'm just not sure if your story was going to follow the show or not if it's just not clear. In addition, when Adriana saw Elena and called her Katerina you mentioned that she waited hundreds of years to kill her which refers her to be much older than the Salvatores time period when they were humans and before they were turned and knew Katherine. Also, if she was the Salvatores sister she wouldn't refer Katherine as Katerina if she was introduced as Katherine unless Katherine told her the truth about her past.

Honestly I don't want to offend you by saying all this but I really want this story to prosper I just wanted to tell you my opinion and I really hope you can clear some of these things up for me. This story is really good don't get me wrong there's just a few things that could be fixed if you want to.