'Till Kingdom Come - Comments

this is great and i miss it when you don't update :( can't wait for more !

@ saratastic
thaanks! haha yea I love writing them!

@ angelxx141
aww thaanks! Update is nearly done and coming soon (fingers crossed)

@ Cinco de Jenna
hahaha yea they're fun to write! thaanks I'm glad you like it :)

can't wait for more! the family dynamic is quite funny.

Amazing! The only thing that disappoints is not being able to read another chapter! Please update soon!!

Oh, clears up a lot of stuff! I love Liz and Addie teaming up against Lil. it's a bit like my best friends and I, only I'm the one getting tag teamed ^-^ I love this update!

@ Cinco de Jenna
thanks so much for your comment! I hope the new chapter answers all your questions? Thanks for your feedback, it helped me see which part to improve and which part to hold on to :) hope you enjoy the next chapter!

@ iWearConverse @saratastic
hahaha keep on reading to find out! ;D

What a coincidence! I was reading this a few weeks ago but my cursor missed the subscribe button!

I like this story a lot. I love how you outline each character and their personality, even Addie. Though the paragraphs depicting each character is long, I like it. Don't change that. On the other hand, the whole ending for the fifth chapter was quiet confusing. I was confused who El and Liz were and and I don't know who the girl Harry hates is (though I'm guessing it might be Lily, btw, I love the '()' parts!) All in all this is an amazing story that I will definitely be subscribing to and following up! I love where this is going, oh, and I'm guessing they're in NYC, but it's a little hard to tell through out the story until the cupcake shop scene.
And as always;
Update soon!

i wanna know what happened so bad!

oh my god he hates her so much i wonder what happened

@ hhhalcyonnn
Ahh thankyouu glad to hear it!

@ iWearConverse thankyou very much! Sorry I'm just realizing your comment now! I hope you still read it :)

I really love this story :)

This is wonderful

I'm very intrigued by the prologue so far. I adore Lily's letter to Harry and all the emotion in it. I think you did a fabulous job portraying her feelings for him to the reader and also expressing those same feelings to Harry as well. You have me wondering what could have happened between them that they've hurt each now. Just reading her letter and knowing that this a is a relationship that has gone south for some reason just makes me sad and also has me questioning how could that have happened. You have a really strong start here that hooks me in and I can't wait to see Harry and Lily's relationship unfold throughout the story.