Slip and Fall - Comments

I fucking LOVE The Aristocats!
I love it as much as I love this chapter

I haven't seen the aristocats in years, geez I feel old
I can't wait to see how the date goes

I fucking love the characters!
Carrie is incredible.

Ryan is so cocky and I love it; Carrie is like a firecracker, and she has some points

OMG Michael is a cutie! I'm really liking this, I hope to see an update soon!

Oh, I sense some little tension brewing; not sure if it's good or bad, but I can't wait to read it

I simply adore the emotion in this chapter and how Ryan seems skittish about Z and ugh! So brilliant!

This is too cute, I already adore Michael and I can't wait to read more about Ryan

I love the simple summary; it's got my mind racing and wondering so much about this story - I'm excited to read on.

I love the interaction between Allie and Michael; they're a beautiful sibling team. It does however seem like from just what you've revealed about them in this chapter that she's more of a parent than a sibling to him.

It's cute though, how she's proud of the way that he bravely goes up to the players and congratulates them on a good job. I'm getting so many feels from this piece, especially he cheers on the opposite team so innocently! And Ryan. Ryan comes in so smoothly at the end of the chapter that I almost missed it!

You dear, you're an amazing writer and I can't wait for an update on this story!