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  • Writer in the Rye

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    You're a mean one........;) hmm hmm hmmmm
    February 28th, 2013 at 08:43pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    Not trying to make your readers jealous..... but I know what happens next :D And I have a question..... when is THE SONG coming into play? I think it should.
    February 26th, 2013 at 02:46am
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    @ writingismypassion23
    Thanks leewa :D Though you have published work, and I don't agree but- SORRY I Might offend you :D
    February 24th, 2013 at 08:33pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    @ writingismypassion23
    Yeah I quickly pressed the button for a default layout. That was not funny at all.

    Yeah chills because this is a scary time.
    February 24th, 2013 at 08:06pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    First of all, why can't I write like you? Haha this is absolute perfection (no surprise there)! And how do you make a layout like this? I can't figure out how! And p.s. the creepy face that flashes up is NOT funny! ;)
    February 24th, 2013 at 05:54pm
  • Annabutt

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    THANK YOU SO MUCH I WASN'T SURE ON THE ARAB THING. And yes, they are in America as slaves. I think that's a good thing you're getting chills? :3 Anyways, thanks for the comment! It made my day :)
    February 24th, 2013 at 05:22pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    I believe that you would call her Arab, not Arabic. Arabic a language and Arab is a person from a certain area..

    Also what's the context of this story? Are they in America? Are these slaves Muslims?

    My whole heart is getting chills.
    February 24th, 2013 at 04:16am
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    @ anonymously yours
    ohmygosh annie chill out it's okay... :D
    February 23rd, 2013 at 03:53am
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    IF YOU KILL THIS GIRL'S MOTHER I SWEAR TO GOD
    February 23rd, 2013 at 03:45am
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