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  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, yay she told him and they did the nasty ;) anyhoo can't wait for round two, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    February 1st, 2014 at 09:42pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    @ TheyCallMeRae
    Thank you baby!! Honestly I am quite proud of how it turned out and how I focused to actually write a chapter I love, myself!! Thank you :)!! I mean I know I updated again! :)! Thank you so much for the comment, you just made my night and I feel accomplished, now to actually do homework....after sleep!!

    I love you too baby and thank you, it means a lot to me that you're proud of me!!
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:04am
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    First off....YOU UPDATED AGAIN!!!! WAHOO!!!! I can't even begin to explain how happy it make me that you are getting back into the flow of writing! And this update was PHENOMENAL!!!!

    SHE TOLD HIM SHE LOVED HIM!!! Gah So amazing! I pictured that whole scene perfectly as if I was there living it out myself!

    The anticipation leading up to the sex was so well written and had me begging for it to happen myself!! Feeling her insecurities and then he gave her that boost she needed in the most perfect way! So much so she even had a bought of confidence when she mentioned him being overdressed which was just perfect and made me giggle!!

    I love how much in detail you went as to describe the cotton sheets and her wandering mind! And the joke about him being boring was funny! I loved the humor you put into the chapter!!

    The way you describe the discarding of their clothes and ow the denim felt just added to it that much more!!!

    The sex scene was amazing! I loved that it was not cliche and perfect!! Because in real life it isnt like that! It made the story more realistic!! You gave the scene total justice, you made it hot yet loving for their first time!! It was stellar!!!

    I love that he did at least help her finish with his hands and mouth!! And of course he showed his dirty side at the end!! haha! Great update babe! You should be insanely proud of yourself on an amazing job well done!!! I love you and am so proud of you!
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:01am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    @ MoMo_92
    I have the chapter finished...but I don't know if I should post or not
    February 1st, 2014 at 09:41am
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    @ Matt Sanders;
    *gasps* u monster lol
    February 1st, 2014 at 09:17am
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    @ Total Nightmare
    Thank you so much! I know aren't they and she does need to tell hiM!!
    February 1st, 2014 at 03:23am
  • Total Nightmare

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    God, could they be more adorable than that? She just needs to tell him she loves him :3
    Loved the update!!
    February 1st, 2014 at 03:20am
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    @ xxGee
    Ahahah I have some of it written!! Just have to finish school work! I will have it up as soon as I can!!
    January 30th, 2014 at 10:13pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    OH MY GOD JUST TELL HIM MEREDITH!! Can you please please please update soon?:( don't leave me hanging Cry
    January 30th, 2014 at 10:07pm
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    @ xxoomwauhzxxoo
    I know! That is how I feel!
    January 30th, 2014 at 09:15pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    @ shortygirl
    I thought he was too :)
    January 30th, 2014 at 09:13pm
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    Tell him dammit!!
    January 30th, 2014 at 07:49pm
  • shortygirl

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    I love how there reconnecting with each other. Zacky so sweet giving that stuffed animal to the little girl.
    January 30th, 2014 at 07:15pm
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    @ AJ9
    Oh yeah I know what you mean :P! You will see what will happen :P!
    January 29th, 2014 at 08:10pm
  • AJ9

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    She should tell him she loves him, and she should be bloody quick about it before he slips through her fingers and she ends up regretting it forever. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:57pm
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    She should tell him she loves him, and she should be bloody quick about it before he slips through her fingers and she ends up regretting it forever. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:57pm
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    She should tell him she loves him, and she should be bloody quick about it before he slips through her fingers and she ends up regretting it forever. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:55pm
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    @ MoMo_92
    Ahahahah! Does she or doesn't she?? :P!! Lol you will see and I'm working on the next chapter, I have some written!
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:39pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Tell him u love him Mer, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 29th, 2014 at 07:28pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    @ TheyCallMeRae
    Bahahah yes I did update and I am not a miss nothing and you should have known...you were the one that believed it!!

    The dang premature send is like oh my gosh!! I don't know how that happened and oh good, I love that you fangirl :P!! lol! I want to go to the pier too!! It's so stupid!! I want to be with them too! I am jealous of my own character!!

    Yes I saw that too when I wrote it!! It makes me chuckles because he looks like this tough, bad boy!! And then he gives the girl the animal!! :)!!

    Yes they kissed and I have plans for them :) that is supposed to be an evil smirk and it never works out!!

    I KNOW!!!

    Now you will get to see more ;)!!
    January 29th, 2014 at 05:59pm
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