@ Bas an Feileacan that's okay. I know my English is not the best in the world cause it's not my first language. you don't have to apologize. it's my problem not yours. I'll just have to work on my grammar.
This was a really good story but I couldn't get past the grammar and capitalization errors. The plot was great and it was really fun, but those errors were so annoying that I can't say I was fully pleased. Sorry...