Never Land - Comments

That's not the last one is it? I forgot.

All the ends have been cute so far! I can't wait to see Harry and Melaina!!!

And now it's time for the mermaid to become human! :D

About time, Captain! :p

Gah! Fathers...

Finally! Somebody is saying what they feel!

Lol I always laugh at Jodie's jealousy. :D

Can I say boys are stupid?

update plsss

Awe crap. Harry's going to melt down.

Psh. I would be flipping out too if I was Harry.

Op! I have an idea as to where he's going! :p

Op! I have an idea as to where he's going! :p

This is so lovely! I've only just found it but I'm so hooked and UGH your layout is perfect I'm obsessed and wow wow wow you have such a lovely flow to your writing A+++ keep writing it's so good

So many people lost with their love lives. S many twists and turns. I'm excited to see where this goes! <3

Wow, I really feel bad for Gabriella. She's struggling to hide her feelings for Zayn this whole time and then another girl comes by and steals his attention away. Curse those flawless girls, eh?
Zayn as a pirate is just perfect though. We already know how ridiculously handsome he is, and then add in the fact that he's one of those up to no good rugged pirates and I just lose it.
Thank you so much for updating as well! I love this story so much. I have this insatiable need of Peter Pan stories, and I also read one direction fanfiction almost obsessively. so really its a double whammy for me to read it.

fun fact: my baby niece's name is Gabriella. ^-^

I found this while trying to find my entrance fee for comment monsters. I have pretty much read every story you happen to take part in, so when I saw this and realized that I haven't commented on it I knew I absolutely had to leave the most kick ass comment ever. This story is insanely good, ladies. I can't get enough of Louis as Peter Pan, how many of us fans have said he looks just like him? Come on, it's perfect. Tiger Lily definitely won me over big time. You guys writing in the original characters and explaining the new characters is just flawless. Everything fits so well, and I never sit and look at this like- "Wtf that makes no sense."

Zayn as a villain will always win me over. I'm an avid Once Upon A Time watcher, and the Hook in that series is sexy and all, but Zayn Malik is definitely giving him some competition. I can't wait to see what you guys do with this. All of the characters are so dynamic, and no one really has the same relationship plots going. LOVE IT!

Just found this little treasure tonight and I have fallen in love. Never Land is my favorite ever! And the fact that this story is Nevwr Land + one Direction is just so perfect!!!! I love it so much! Each one of you have such talent in story telling, it's unbelievable! Please please please keep it up!!! I just love every minute of it. It's amazing.

Aww, Evelyn and Louis were so cute on the roof! I like that she was adventurous enough to go with him and I can't believe Niall is going to go along! That is going to be funny!
Ooohh, I really like Jodie! She seems like a badass and I think she's gonna be one of my faves. Their treehouse sounds so cute and I would let Harry make me soup anytime!
Tiger Lily is an even bigger badass than Jodie! Her and Liam fighting is hilarious!
Aww a mermaid?! That is so freaking cool. I can totally see Harry like that too!
I still like Zayn even though he's a bad guy! I can't helo it!
I'm going to read all of Katie's stuff so she has a bunch of nice comments to read when she gets better! Get well soon Katie <3 Mibba loves you!

Aww, poor Zayn.
I loved that chapter!