Misery's Company - Comments

"Shits gonna go dowwwn' WHAT A TEASE YOU ARE!! So excited you got this out, and I can't wait for chapter seven!!

I was a little confused but a lot happy to this story updated! This is one of the stories that I've missed reading, so I'm really glad you're updating again!! Can't wait to read more!

Ive been sent here by comment swap. I only read up to chapter one because Im on my phone and my connection is pretty slow.

So first off I noticed the summary is a bit long, it goes into a lot of detail on specifics of the story would I feel would be better explained in the story.
I get the "mafia" thing from Alexanders home, and his sisters seem a bit, best words I can think of, over the top. Like psycho, lock them up in juvie with padded walls, over the top. Alex genuinely doesnt seem like he belongs to that family, much less wanna be part of it.

Overall your grammar is great and you pay great attention to detail. My "conplaint" and its more a personal prefernence than anything else, is that you use underlines instead of italics. Like I said its more of my personal prefernce because underlines arent generally used in standard book formats.

i love this so much! :) i dont really understand why it hasn't got any more comments/recs...
i can't wait for more, please update soon!

gah, everyone curses so freaking much. ^_^ I'm kinda excited for the next chapter.

This is very interesting. I love Alex, but I already kind of really hate his sisters. I dunno why, but they just seem really annoying and gah...but I do love Collin too and I can't wait to read more.

Hehe I like Lexi. Surprised by Lin though. From his character description, I didn't take him to mess with thugs. He adapted well enough.