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  • ihave0time

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    Crossing my fingers for an update soon!!
    August 30th, 2013 at 07:04pm
  • Synfullytwysted

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    I do feel for Les, especially after she spilled a little of her story and how she's feeling to Vic, but Clementine is a child, and won't understand why her aunt can't stand to be around her. And now she needs to open up to Mike, to help him understand just why she acts the way she does. Holding stuff in is never good.

    I think I fall in love with story more with each update :) xx
    May 17th, 2013 at 10:49pm
  • ImNotInsaneXo

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    Hahah when I read this, I was like

    Awwh Shit Boy! Fighhttt!

    And then she told vic her story :(

    But anyway, this is really good!
    Im keen for updates, asap please!
    May 15th, 2013 at 02:45pm
  • ashlynn202

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    So good =)
    I wanna see how it all works out, I can't wait)
    May 15th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • Synfullytwysted

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    Oh wow, I didn't expect her to leave Mike like that, leaving him with the responsibility of Clementine. That's kind of harsh, and although I understand her hatred towards her sister, to take it out on a innocent child, totally selfish. Can't wait for the next update and to see just what's happened :) x
    May 12th, 2013 at 10:17pm
  • thelovely

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    she left him?? ugh and I wonder what happened. SMH write more asap!
    May 11th, 2013 at 08:29am
  • ImNotInsaneXo

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    Awh! Mike is so cute with Clementine!
    I love this story! :D
    Its really good.
    Updates Soon please!!
    May 10th, 2013 at 06:26am
  • Synfullytwysted

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    I love this story so far, and how Mike is with Clementine. It's so damn adorable and shows a side to him that you kind of don't expect. I really can't wait for the next chapter x
    May 7th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • thelovely

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    alessandra needs to perk up and be their for clemetine and I'm happy mike is supporting clemetine alot. Loved the chapter. write more asap!
    May 6th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • thelovely

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    alessandra needs to perk up and be their for clemetine and I'm happy mike is supporting clemetine alot. Loved the chapter. write more asap!
    May 6th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • Howaboutno

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    omg that last chapter was jsut so cute
    May 5th, 2013 at 08:34pm
  • boombox-generation

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    This is incredible!
    May 2nd, 2013 at 12:13am
  • vickyptv

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    I love the way you've described the hospital, just everything. You have really amazing writing skills. Great update :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:32am
  • thelovely

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    Love how there for he is and she really should open up more to him. This was great! write more asap
    April 30th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • thejagrafess

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    ahh! This is fantastic :D Can't wait for the next update :)
    April 24th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • thelovely

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    so happy for an update, this was so well written and interesting
    April 24th, 2013 at 01:00am
  • thelovely

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    yay a mike fanfic! I really like the way things are staring write more asap :)
    April 21st, 2013 at 08:56am
  • PunkIsNotDead2318

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    She may not be pregnant, but I have a feeling that doesn't mean childless...excited for more!
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:50am
  • vickyptv

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    I'm intrigued by this story. The story line already seems good. I'm excited to read more of this story :)
    April 20th, 2013 at 11:32pm
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